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I am passionate about learning new things. I enjoy working in a team or individual. I am self motivate and reliable person. I always complete all my tasks within time and start doing new task as early as possible. I am able to work in any works environment and in any situation. I would like to use my skills to contribute positively to any works situation. I do what I committed to do without procrastinations as a result I always keep good relation with people such as teachers, colleagues, friends etc.
During my study I have decided to acquire Accountancy qualification as well as Business. And I have accumulated both qualifications in the same year. Throughout the course I had to work toward assessments deadline. As I studied for two courses at same time I had to tremendously organise for course works. During the course of my study at Newham College, I was a member of the group that picked up the group of the year Award. When I made commitment I strive to make it happen. I am able to cope with several assignments simultaneously.
I am passionate about learning new things. I enjoy working in a team environment or individually.
I am self motivated and a very reliable person and always complete my tasks within the allocated time frame in order to get started on new tasks as quickly as possible.
I am able to work in any environment or situation. I would like to use my skills to contribute positively to my work situation.
I commit to what I need to do without procrastinations. As a result I always keep good relations with people such as teachers, colleagues, friends etc.
During my study I have decided to acquire accountancy and business qualifications. I have worked hard to accumulate both qualifications in the same year. Throughout the course I had to work toward assessment deadlines. As I studied for two courses at same time I had to be well organised for course works.
During the course of my study at Newham College, I was a member of the group that won "The Group Of The Year Award".
When I made commitment to something, I strive to make it happen. I am able to multi task and can cope with several assignments simultaneously.

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I am passionate about learning new things, enjoy working in a team or individually, self motivated, a reliable person, always complete all of my tasks within the time frame and start doing new tasks as early as possible.
I am able to work in any environment, in any situation, like to use my skills to contribute positively to any works situation, committed to do without any procrastinations. As a result I always keep good relations with people such as teachers, colleagues, friends etc.
During my study I have decided to acquire an accountancy qualification as well as business. I have accumulated both qualifications in the same year. Throughout the course I had to work towards assessment deadlines. I studied for two courses at the same time. I had to tremendously organise for course works. During the course of my study at Newham College, I was a member of the group that picked up the Group Of The Year Award. When I made a commitment I strive to make it happen. I am able to cope with several assignments simultaneously.
This is what it should look like:
I am passionate about learning new things. I enjoy working in a team or as an individual. I am a self motivated and reliable person. I always complete tasks before the designated deadline and start doing new tasks as early as possible. I am able to work in any work environment and in any situation. I would like to use my skills to contribute positively to any work situation. I do what I am committed to do without procrastinations; as a result I always keep good relationships with people such as teachers, colleagues, friends etc.
During my study I have decided to acquire Accountancy qualification as well as Business, and accumulated both qualifications in the same year. Throughout the course I had to work toward assessments deadline. As I studied for two courses at same time I had to be organised for the courses. During the course of my study at Newham College, I was a member of the group that picked up the "Group of the Year Award". When I make commitments, I strive to make it happen. I am able to cope with several assignments simultaneously.
It could still be improved, but it reads much better like this.
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